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If life hit you hard, fall, but stand tall,
If everything seem lost, go back to rise once more,
if you who is lost don't know where to go, open you arms and embrace the love,
if love fail you and don't know what to hold, use your anger and face the world.
For the conteste of a letter to my younger self :iconxpose-it: :iconlive-love-write:
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cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010  Student Writer
your work is really great but maybe you should check for grammar it would increase the writing magnificently.
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darkraike Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thank you and i am very conscious of my grammar issues, and i do re-vise old works whenever i can plus i have some friends (natural English speakers) who check for me too i am glad that even with that on the dragging down you liked my work that means a lot for me and push me to keep improving.

P.S: If you read any of my work you can feel free to point to any errors you may find ^^
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cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2010  Student Writer
your welcome. and if i do happen to read your work i will be happy to correct it :D
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darkraike Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:P correction : Glad to hear so lol
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cristalia09usagi Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2010  Student Writer
okie :D lol
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LRainbow Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2010
This is really good <3 I reallly enjoyed it ^^ Very short but incredibily emotive :)
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darkraike Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thank you soo much for the positive feedback, i am glad you liked my work ^^
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LRainbow Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2010
i did :) carry on writing! :D
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darkraike Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
aye aye captain ^^
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