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For in the mirror she exist

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Some verses for a lonely soul,
from where they come no one know,
i want to be of those lucky ones that so i can understand,
what in my all my wisdom i haven't know to make,
i don't wanna hurt no one even less make them cry,
but now control of my life i will taken and get what i desire,
and not what they aspire,
for this is my sweat and work, my tears and blood,
and i will spill it where i judge it is right,
if you are interested, stand, walk and in the mirror your reflection observe,
and you will find where is it worth to spill all my dreams,
is not crazy love, is simple love.
another traduction from one of my old Spanish works ^^

Edit : after some recalling, this was from when i had a gf, it was meant for her she is the one who is supposed to look into the mirror to know what i would fight for
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artifice-child's avatar
this is translation from Spanish? awesome.

you have some lovely lines here...the last three stick with me. not crazy love, but simple love is a wonderful phrase.

although "don't wanna hurt no one" seems a little too commonplace and colloquial compared to the rest of the poem.